Process Oriented Feedback¶

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Description¶

Process oriented feedback directs attention to how a learner produced their work — the strategies chosen, the reasoning applied, the effort and self-monitoring deployed — rather than to the person ("you're smart") or to a bare judgment of the product ("B+"). It answers the question "what did you do, and what could you do differently next time?" by naming specific processes to repeat, revise, or replace, often paired with cues about where to go next.

Design Implications¶

Feedback is among the most powerful influences on achievement, but its effects are highly variable — poorly targeted feedback can reduce performance Kluger & DeNisi found over a third of feedback interventions lowered performance. [~S]. Process oriented feedback works because it gives learners actionable information about controllable behavior, supporting self-regulation rather than ego defense Feedback framed around task and process improves achievement more than person-focused praise. [+S]. It should be specific, timely, and tied to criteria the learner understands, and delivered while revision is still possible (Assessment for Learning).

Context¶

Requirements¶

• Clear success criteria so the feedback references a shared standard
• Knowledge of the learner's actual process (drafts, think-alouds, error patterns), not just the final artifact
• A window for the learner to act on the feedback — revise, retry, or apply it to a new task (Practice)
• Feedback phrased as cues and questions ("What strategy did you use here? What else might work?") rather than verdicts

Constraints¶

• Feedback on the person (praise or criticism of ability) undermines persistence and invites defensive withdrawal [-S]; even process praise loses effect when learners perceive it as controlling
• Feedback with no opportunity to use it is largely wasted effort [-M]; grades alone can override informational content
• For novices, purely process-level cues without task-level correction can leave misconceptions intact [~M] — combine with specific task feedback
• Overly detailed feedback can overwhelm working memory for complex tasks [~M]

Implementation Variability¶

• Written margin comments vs. live conferencing vs. automated hints in adaptive systems
• Peer feedback protocols (e.g., structured critique galleries) that make process criteria explicit
• Self-questioning prompts that turn external feedback into internal self-regulation routines

Target Learners¶

• Struggling learners, who most need to see effort and strategy as the levers of improvement rather than fixed ability
• Learners developing self-regulation, who benefit from feedback that models monitoring and strategy selection
• High achievers can also benefit, but person-focused praise for them entrenches performance goals and fear of failure [-S]

Target Learning Goals¶

• Skill refinement: improving strategies and procedures across iterations
• Self-regulated learning: building habits of monitoring, evaluating, and adjusting one's own process
• Growth mindset and persistence: attributing outcomes to controllable causes

Instructions¶

1. Establish success criteria and exemplars before the task so feedback has a shared reference point (Advance Organizers, Clear Structure)
2. Collect evidence of process — drafts, error logs, or brief Check-Ins — not just the final product
3. Deliver feedback that names the specific strategy or step, explains its effect, and offers a concrete alternative or next cue
4. Require an action: revision, retry, or application to a parallel task (Practice, Coaching)
5. Fade external feedback by prompting learners to generate their own process evaluations (Articulation)

Related Strategies¶

• Action-Oriented Feedback — the sibling strategy focused on the concrete next action; process feedback explains why, action feedback specifies what next
• Formative Assessment Practices — the broader cycle in which process feedback is the informational engine

Examples¶

• Writing conferences (Lucy Calkins' Units of Study, https://www.unitsofstudy.com) — teachers name the specific move a young writer attempted ("you tried a lead that raises a question") and coach the next revision step.
• Mathematics error analysis — instead of marking answers wrong, the teacher asks the student to narrate their solution steps, then targets the flawed strategy ("you regrouped before checking place value").
• Peer critique protocols (e.g., EL Education's critique and revision routines, https://eleducation.org) — structured "kind, specific, helpful" feedback on drafts, iterating multiple times before publication.

Key Sources¶

• Hattie, J., & Timperley, H. (2007). The power of feedback. Review of Educational Research, 77(1), 81–112. doi:10.3102/003465430298487
• Kluger, A. N., & DeNisi, A. (1996). The effects of feedback interventions on performance: A historical review, a meta-analysis, and a preliminary feedback intervention theory. Psychological Bulletin, 119(2), 254–284. doi:10.1037/0033-2909.119.2.254
• Brookhart, S. M. (2017). How to give effective feedback to your students (2nd ed.). ASCD.
• Dweck, C. S. (2006). Mindset: The new psychology of success. Random House.
• Shute, V. J. (2008). Focus on formative feedback. Review of Educational Research, 78(1), 153–189. doi:10.3102/0034654307313795